Re: Draft GLOS Proposal

["Dale K. Phenicie" <dkphenicie@mindspring.com>]

Roger - here's some suggested edits aimed at sharpening up the objective
statements, putting them in an "essential to the program"
context.  As we discussed, I would suggest reordering the subsystem
descriptions to put the modeling portion about 3rd in the list. 
Good luck on getting this together.  Thanks for all your hard work -
and for a good meeting last week.  I came away thinking we're making
good progress and have sharpened our focus substantially.




DKP



At 03:34 PM 4/13/2007, Roger Gauthier wrote:
> Ladies/Gentlemen:   The GLOS Board of Directors has reviewed
> the attached draft proposal that the Regional Association intends to
> submit to NOAA under the Regional Coastal Ocean Observing System (RCOOS)
> call for proposals.  The GLOS Board seeks your comments on this
> proposal by close of business on Monday, April 16, 2007.  I
> apologize for the lack of adequate review time on your part, but the GLOS
> team has been working diligently on vetting this document with as many
> prospective collaborators or affected users of GLOS products or services
> as well.  Use of the MSWord Track Changes option would help expedite
> finish of the document on schedule.
>  
>  
>
> Roger L.
> Gauthier 
> Interim Executive Director, Great Lakes Observing System 
> c/o Great Lakes Commission 
> 2805 South Industrial Highway, Suite #100 
> Ann Arbor, MI 48104-6791 
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>

Dale K. Phenicie
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